MLP short-short story

[ghouldilocks]

I got a letter from my niece the other day - she's 6, and is lately interested in practicing writing. It prompted me to flip through my old journals from when I was around the same age, and came across this self-insert almost-fanfic that I wrote about My Little Pony 

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[Bekuno]

I can't figure out what's more hilarious: the fact that humpty dumpty is there or that one pony just has the word "tabby" as a symbol instead of a cat

[Leave a Whisper]

aww that's precious!

[ghouldilocks]

I can't figure out what's more hilarious: the fact that humpty dumpty is there or that one pony just has the word "tabby" as a symbol instead of a cat

lol! Especially since I had to split the letters up to get them to fit on her flank. 

And Humpty-Dumpty is what I called Jangles and Tangles. One was Humpty and one was Dumpty. "Scissors" was Baby Snippy, "Balla" and "Shoes" would have been Baby Sweetsteps and Baby Toe Dancer. "Diapers" would have been a Fancy Pants baby, lmao but I'm not sure if it would have been mine or one of my friends'. 

[EnaRocketQueen]

That's adorable! I've always loved writing (have a massive project story on the go right now), and wrote a lot of short stories when I was younger. And yes, most if not all of them were about ponies!!

[RainbowQuartz]

I showed this to ~the niece~ and she loved it. She's going to write one for you and we'll send it out soon.

Those drawings belong in a museum.

[LunaMoonCustoms1212]

This is so cute!! I will have to dig around to find some of my old drawings and stories.

[Kanchii]

AHHH SO CUTE! Writings and drawings by children is so adorable I can't stand it!

[KookyRaccoon]

Short, to the point, and creatively illustrated. Brilliant I love it lol  Humpty could be the stuff of nightmares though, those soulless eyes...

[scarletjul]

How cute! 

[Lucky_Ladybug]

LOL! Very cute.

[ghouldilocks]

Short, to the point, and creatively illustrated. Brilliant I love it lol  Humpty could be the stuff of nightmares though, those soulless eyes...

lol! The baby next to him looks weirdly evil, too, come to think of it. Humpty's minion, maybe.