Anyone interested in pre-reading a pony fic?

[Storybelle]

I've already posted this to MLPTP but I thought I'd try here as well. I've had some good feedback but I'm still searching for a pre-reader!  I'm writing a G1 inspired pony fic and I have my best friend proofread it but she's not into pony. I need someone familiar with G1 and G4 who can tell me if Tambelon is creepy enough or if Celestia is in character for example.

I've tried Fimfiction but haven't found anybody who fits my requirements or isn't interested in the fic I'm doing, either because it's OC or it's too long or just don't know much about G1. I thought I'd try here on the off chance somebody would be up for it.

The fic is on fimfiction under the pen name of Storybelle if you want to see if it's something you're interested in or just want to have a read. Any feedback would be appreciated though my ultimate goal is to find a pre-reader for each chapter.

Thanks in advance!

[Lore-Lei]

I'm not good at reading stories as much as writing them but I will certainly give it a try and see how far I can go, alright?

[Storybelle]

Wow, would you? If you're not sure about it, we always can do a trial run? Just a few chapters and see if it works. 

[Ponyfan]

I might be able to help also. 




Ponyfan

[Storybelle]

Would you? That would be fantastic. I will PM both of you to see what sort of schedule you can do and how much you're interested in doing. Thanks very much!

[scarletjul]

If you still need help, I could also probably help you. 

[lostpony]

I can read and got an A in all English classes so far.... 

I am fan of FiM and have watched about half of G1 so far including Tambelon and love G1 too.

Do I need an account to access it on fimfiction or just go there?

[Storybelle]

No need for an account, if you just google Storybelle and Fimfiction, it'll bring me right up.