Need help proofreading a short english abstract

[zora]

hi native english speaking pony lovers 

i am currently writing my masters thesis and we have to write an abstract for it in english. now i am not a native english speaker (my mothers language is german) and i have difficulties in translating my german abstract into (correct) english.

could anybody proof read it and help me with the grammar and the syntax? i will send it in a PM.

i promise its short, just 269 words 

THANK YOU IN ADVANCE! 

[andibgoode]

I can help if no one else can (though it might be good if more than one person looks at it?)

[WildBlue]

I can try to help also. Just send me a PM if you like to.

[Em_L._Pea_Customs]

I would be happy to proofread it as well, Zora. 

[zora]

whooo thank you all!

i decided to send it to one of you first, then take the corrected abstract and send it to another one and so on. so you do not have to correct my obvious mistakes twice

THANK YOU SO MUCH! this really helps!

[WildBlue]

Sounds like a good plan.

[kellyponyfeathers]

I volunteer too.    I'm professionally trained as an editor.

[kaoskat]

Looks like you have help! Best of luck!

[melodys_angel]

Aww, good luck hun <3

[Eviecorn]

If you want one more extra eye, I have an English degree and could help.