Custom Critique Thread!

[Colorscapesart]

So let's see how this works.  I'll go first to help break the ice.

Post a custom here if:
~You want HONEST feedback
~You want to grow as an artist
~You won't take comments as personal attacks

Post a comment here if:
~You have something to genuinely help the artist

(If it helps, you should post AT LEAST one suggestion/critique for each compliment.)


First up:
My most recent custom, flame kissed Moondancer.  I am not entirely happy with her.  Is it the pony itself or is it a rut?
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[NoDivision]

Hmm. Well, compared to some of your other flame kissed ponies I feel like the rainbow effect on this one is a lot more vibrant/pronounced. It's beautifully done - but I think maybe if if were a little bit more subtle that would look good - especially with a pony who is as clean looking as moondancer.

Also (and this part is totally personal preference - there's nothing wrong with the way it is now) maybe the hair could use an extra piece or two? Maybe a piece that falls over her face a bit?

Hope that's helpful

[NichiTsukinoko]

Hmm. Well Moondancer is my favorite pony, so I automatically like this. I think I agree with NoD on the rainbow effect. I love it, but I think for a pony like Moondancer, maybe a bit more subtle would be better. I love the hair as it is. I think maybe in the future you could try making the moon more sharp, less rounded. I love the moon on the left side. The one on the right side is the one that looks kind of roundy.

I'm not sure if that helps or not, but I love that you posted this thread. It's good practice to give constructive criticism and to receive it as well.

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Could someone critique this custom of mine that I did recently?

[hannaliten]

Nichi- the only critique I would have is the curl in the front.  Otherwise it's a pretty pony!

[Colorscapesart]

I'd like to see the blonde color that's in the tail more in the mane too.  That might be my preference.  Agree with Karin on that one pesky curl.  That location makes it draw so much more attention than the other ringlets!  Do like the color scheme though!

[NichiTsukinoko]

Thanks guys! 

[Ambar]

ummm i only have one point.... purple eyes.... maybe blue or red? just to make it  pop (anyway she is very lovely as she is
Colorscapesart: i don´t know...rivets in the hair? and as ND told adding a piece in the hair, she is great.

[LadySatine]

CSA:  I agree about adding a forelock to her mane. But she is very pretty indeed!
Nichi: I think the you need to add a contrasting color somewhere on her, they eyes is a good suggestion and easy too. She is very cute, I love the Sundae bests.

Here is one of mine that has been sitting around for almost two years now. I know she needs something, but I don't know what to do with her. I'd love to know what you all think.

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[SunPony]

Here is one of mine that has been sitting around for almost two years now. I know she needs something, but I don't know what to do with her. I'd love to know what you all think.
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Maybe she would look a little more unified if the pumpkin color matched her hair color more?  It is a great hair color for a halloween pony.

[LadySatine]

Yes, that sounds good. I left her hair long so I could even reuse that hair for another custom.

[kaoskat]

Curls! You do wonderful straw curls LadySatine and I think the straw curls would look perfect on her and suit her over all design well.

[Colorscapesart]

I'd like to see a hint of pink or black in her hair.  It's pretty, but doesn't pop or tie together for me.  I think the symbol is great though!

[NoDivision]

Hm. I would suggest maybe adding some hilight  or shadow to the pumpkins to make them a bit more dimensional. I think because of the spiderwebs it took my brain a moment to register that it was a pumpkin. The shape is great, but I think a touch of dimension would make them really jump out

[Roogna]

I kinda agree with what's been said
CSA - I also think a forlock might help (I partially blame the pose - it's a difficult one to work with). I also think the left symbol looks better and sharper than the right side. maybe some of it is the spacing? Also, the left side and horn seem to have taken the black wash better than the right side. So...just tweaks? I do love the hair shapes on her

Nichi - the tail seems to have more of a light color than the mane (I loooove the mane's blend!). The front curl didn't turn out as perfects the others (I know from experience how frustrating that is and how you may not know till you take the curlers out) - very cute - I actually like this look better than the original

LadyS - I think the cutie mark is cute, but it could use some more definition from outline, shading, or both. Maybe something darker to tie into the hair more. You might also consider adding a small pumpkin/web to her forehead - I think it could be a nice touch with the simplicity of her symbols

thanks CSA for starting this. It can be a good and useful thing for those interested

[LadySatine]

Thank you everyone! I love this thread.