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I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« on: August 13, 2012, 09:19:58 PM »
But I drew some Rarijack shipping because I just couldn't get over how cute they are.

Link below to my Deviant Art.  The picture is SFW and not blocked on DA, just a leeeeetle risque (hence the mature content warning).  Please note that there are other artworks on my DA that are NSFW and contain mature content as well; they should be blocked for MA by DeviantArt but you have been notified.

Rarity and Applejack, with text:

http://spiderqueenrhi.deviantart.com/#/d5atrip

And here is a version without text:

http://spiderqueenrhi.deviantart.com/#/d5anrpn

I hope you like!  Please leave comments, I love, love, LOVE comments!!   :biggrin:

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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #1 on: August 16, 2012, 08:38:43 AM »
I am confused as to why this would be considered "risque". AJ has a hold of Rarity's shirt.. They are holding hands.. Rarity has her hand on AJ's thigh.. None of that seems risque to me. There isn't even any smoochin' going on!

I do find it to be an adorable picture though. :) My only constructive criticisim I would offer would be to consider a change from black line art, to colored line art for this, and to perhaps remove the line art from the tree leaves entirely.

I do love how tender and sweet the picture is. You really capture the emotion of a moment very well.

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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #2 on: August 16, 2012, 11:39:45 AM »
I am confused as to why this would be considered "risque". AJ has a hold of Rarity's shirt.. They are holding hands.. Rarity has her hand on AJ's thigh.. None of that seems risque to me. There isn't even any smoochin' going on!

I do find it to be an adorable picture though. :) My only constructive criticisim I would offer would be to consider a change from black line art, to colored line art for this, and to perhaps remove the line art from the tree leaves entirely.

I do love how tender and sweet the picture is. You really capture the emotion of a moment very well.

I think it's supposed to be more of a gentle fondle than holding the shirt, so I think a general content warning was a good idea ;)
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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2012, 06:34:03 PM »
Just to answer the question, it was supposed to be just her curling her fingers around the hem of the tank top / playing with the hem.  AJ's hand isn't actually supposed to be touching Rarity at all... but I guess it maybe hard to tell?   The warning is better safe than sorry, I guess!
« Last Edit: August 16, 2012, 06:38:51 PM by brantwijn »

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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2012, 09:02:16 PM »
You have a nice way with expression and your coloring is great.
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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2012, 09:34:53 PM »
Thank you, Diamond!  I was SUPER happy with the colors on this one.

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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2012, 01:17:02 AM »
That's a sweet picture.  The expressions are wonderful.

And it's better safe than sorry with mature content.  :nod:  It's not out of our rating, but not everyone is partial to romantic anthros.  Good call with the warning.
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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2012, 07:41:48 AM »
Aww not really a shipper but that's pretty nicely done.
But yeah, I understand wanting to be on the edge of caution for the mature content.
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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2012, 11:12:57 AM »
very nice drawing, id say theres a fairly easy fix for her hand not supposed to be touching rarity... just add another shadow along that strap on her tank and itll look lifted away from her.

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Re: I Don't Normally Draw Fan Art... (Mature Content)
« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2012, 11:33:36 AM »
very nice drawing, id say theres a fairly easy fix for her hand not supposed to be touching rarity... just add another shadow along that strap on her tank and itll look lifted away from her.

Thanks, I was looking at it and wondering if a shadow somewhere would help! 

 

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