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Offline StrawberryFair

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Grammar question?
« on: August 07, 2012, 09:18:41 AM »
How should this be written?

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Between two- to five million birds

Should it be "between two million and five million?" Or "two and five million?" Or even "two- and five-million?"

Can't quite figure it out!  :blush:

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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #1 on: August 07, 2012, 09:50:25 AM »
Im not an english teacher but I think the first 2 would be right, using each depending on the context of the sentance. The first would be something more formal, the second not so much :)

Dont quote me though, thats just what it looks like to me^^
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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #2 on: August 07, 2012, 11:31:03 AM »
I agree with MA, but I can't swear to it either. *sits and waits for Evie*
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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2012, 11:38:57 AM »
I'm very fond of grammar, and I would be inclined to say that your original quotation of 'two to five million' sounds correct to me.

However, I'd otherwise go for the second option, the first is a mouthful and I do not think the dashes in the third are neccessary!!
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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2012, 11:43:50 AM »
I'd vote for 'between two and five million birds'
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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2012, 11:47:11 AM »
I'm a copyeditor/proofreader for a living(ish), and I would write it as "between two and five million." "Between two million and five million," is correct, but that first "million" is unnecessary (unless you're talking about net worth!  :lol:).

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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2012, 11:59:56 AM »
Good suggestions here!

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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2012, 12:26:26 PM »
Don't "between two and five million" and "two to five million" have a similar meaning? So using "between" would make "to" (as in the original quote) redundant. I agree with the others, "between two and five million birds" sounds best to me in this context.

As far as I know, the hyphen is only needed if you use the numerals as a part of a compound noun, cf. "a five-year-old girl".

/ edit to fix a stupid grammar mistake  :blush:
« Last Edit: August 07, 2012, 12:56:49 PM by Griffin »
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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2012, 01:15:43 PM »
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Don't "between two and five million" and "two to five million" have a similar meaning? So using "between" would make "to" (as in the original quote) redundant.
Ahhhh, that's an interesting observation! Any other thoughts about "to" verses "and"?

As far as the phrasing itself, THANK YOU to everyone for helping! I agree that "two to five million" works best!

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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2012, 03:31:07 PM »
You should use "between two and five million." "To" is a preposition and not a conjunction, which is needed to join the two items.

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Re: Grammar question?
« Reply #10 on: August 08, 2012, 05:20:43 AM »
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