Working on an adoptable (not ready yet)

[BlazePony84]

So, I'm working on the template for an adoptable, trying to practice shading, details, etc.  Any comments/criticism?  Made in Gimp on laptop w/ trackpad (don't have a mouse).  The lyrics will be customisable as well, the ones here are from "Melody" by the Rolling Stones.
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[Marigold]

I love it!  What kind of suggestions are you looking for?  Like maybe moving the lyrics up higher so you can see them all?  Oh and the music notes are backwards. The dot goes on the left side when the stick goes up. 

The pony is very cute. I will want one.

[BlazePony84]

Updated version, much better shading
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[Marigold]

Ooooh!  Looks great!  You did a nice job with the shading and I like the changes.

[Griffin]

Wow, you did that with a touchpad?! That's amazing, I would never have the patience for something like that.

The pony is cute, her expression is perfect for the theme! She really looks like she's enjoying the music. I like the changes you made too, the composition looks more dynamic now. 

[ZennaBug]

I like the second version better too.  She's really cute!