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Offline TwistedRainbow

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almost a year, can you tell? critique
« on: March 23, 2012, 11:11:43 PM »
i joined the arena last feb. but didnt start customs until last summerish. so since its been a while i was wondering if i could get some critique.


am i making good progress? what should i work on?



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i wish i had more to show but i have so many WIPs right now, i wish they were done.


so what do you think? what can i do to make my customs go from "that looks nice" to "wow that looks amazing! i want" ???


show me your first custom vs your most recent!
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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #1 on: March 23, 2012, 11:14:43 PM »
You're doing fantastic! I can see your control of paint has gotten better, and your lines are more fine, and your FBRs are super smooth! Can't wait to see where you are in a year from now!

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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2012, 01:33:51 AM »
i think your progress is great. personally, i always prefer "real" hair over yarn hair too, and i think the gradients make the customs look more professional!
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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2012, 05:22:27 AM »
You've made great progress! All of your recent ponies are really beautiful- the designs and the execution are very nice and , like Lina said, very professional-looking.
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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2012, 07:38:35 AM »
thanks all, i wish i had more to show

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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #5 on: March 26, 2012, 08:17:44 AM »
I can see you made great progress, probably quicker than me!

Your first are typical first ponies in my eyes: shiny paint, low quality or yarn hair :) don't worry I did the same!

Now your latest ponies are really good! As others said you have a much. Ether control of your paint, lines are smoother and gradients and fbr look awsome.

Improvement? Keep on customizing! Maybe try your hands at hair styling?

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Re: almost a year, can you tell? critique
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2012, 08:58:25 AM »
Keep going, every pony is getting better and better.  I love the gradients, they are nicely done and really enhance the pony.

 

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