Yeah, me too. You can hardly tell, so I am quite curious

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And behold what I did for my boyfriend today !    (He will take care of dinner, so I did the dessert hehe)


Have a very nice day, everypony !

Keep on voting ! Every vote is helpful !

OMG ! First of all, congrats !

Second, DOES ANYONE know what that "fakie" is in the last picture? I have four of them and I love them, but I never found any information on them !! I need to know if anyone has more of them; I would love to buy the remaining ones I don't own yet.

Any info is precious !

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Thank you so much

Bump ! Quick, grab them before they are gone for good !!

No- questions are fine. I just answer as many as I can. Unfortunatly I can't give you advice specific to this picture on shading as the linearts  are a little off. I did a red line crit. I hope this shows my thoughts. I'm not an expert on anatomy, but this is how I'd see how the anatomy is laid out. where the pants bunched up was really tight, and the crotch level was too high. If her pelvis was tilted back she would have that shape but the lines on her abdominals suggested it was pointing down so I went with that. I'm not entirely happy with my crit as she looks like she's leaning to the side, but if I wanted to fix that, I think I'd have to redraw the whole picture cause I'm not sure what's throwing me off yet.


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I hope this helps steer you in a better direction though


I think it's already pretty dynamic. Angles are what makes a picture dynamic. And foreshortening. I think if the bird looked like it was coming towards us it's be dynamic, but it might be overboard, you know? The bird isnt' going anywhere, and it looks like it should be an energetic picture, which it is.


Don't panic over dynamic in pictures. People rave on about it, but not all pictures need it. Dynamic elements should be used when they're needed, I'm frankly SICK of seeing pro artists that use dynamics in ALL their art to make it edgy. It just takes the impact of it away when you do use it. To me, it's a secret weapon. Besides, there's tones of other things you can do to give your picture more energy. A background would do this picture WONDERS for energy. A fun slightly forested field with fun flowers and bushes or something would add FAR more to this than a dynamic angle.  I think that might be what's bugging you the most to be honest. The proportion issues are only noticeable due to the lack of background. If the background was all you updated, you could almost get away with anything on this character

Wow, this was quite helpful ! Thank you SO SO SO much for the help !

And yes, the fact that I suck at backgrounds does bug me xD I have to work extra hard on that from now on ( I should've already lol), but yes, that's it, I suppose. Also, the lines over the drawing just confirmed what I was suspicious about, so thanks

And the dynamic thing, yeah, I totally agree with you, but I was wanted to know what you had to say about it

Once again, thank you so much for the help !