Princess Crystal

[bladed]

only lines right now, I'm too lazy to colour
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[Moonbreeze]

Looks great so far! I'd like to see it coloured Only her back leg seems a little bit off

[Griffin]

Hey, my lil' sis used to have this pony! I hope you'll find the motivation to colour it later, I like how you've already hinted at the colours by colouring the linework. The pose looks very playful and there's great movement to it! If you're looking for some constructive critique, the left hind leg looks a bit unnatural raised high like that. Lowering it to the level of the corner of her cape would make the pose more natural while preserving the lovely sense of movement you've captured here.

[bladed]

Hey, my lil' sis used to have this pony! I hope you'll find the motivation to colour it later, I like how you've already hinted at the colours by colouring the linework. The pose looks very playful and there's great movement to it! If you're looking for some constructive critique, the left hind leg looks a bit unnatural raised high like that. Lowering it to the level of the corner of her cape would make the pose more natural while preserving the lovely sense of movement you've captured here.

Thanks! I think when I drew the cape I messed up the leg a bit.

[ZennaBug]

It's a very fun pose.  It can be hard to get the anatomy just right when you're drawing items of clothing on your pony, but I agree with what Griffin said about the hind leg.  Lowering it just a tad would really help the flow.