My Little Pony Fraggle Rock Crossover Comic

[systemcat]

I know this is going to take a long time just to finish the first page, but I gotta share most of the line art and hear your thoughts .

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[Merged two topics dealing with the same comic - thanks, Griffin]

[OLumeVaSti]

Awesome! That would be the best crossover ever!

[Griffin]

I don't think I've ever watched Fraggle Rock but this looks like a fun crossover! I love the first and second panels, you have such a wonderful ability to convey things like depth and facial expressions and body language through simple linearts. In my work I always feel like those things only come together when I colour the drawings, or alternatively at the sketch stage - I need a whole bunch of lines to express something you seem to be able to do so neatly and precicely... I would like to say effortlessly but of course I don't know how long it takes you to polish your linearts. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that I really admire your linework! I'm eager to see how this story continues.    

[ZennaBug]

I'm not familiar with Fraggle Rock either. But I really like how you divided the panels with dynamic lines, rather than just straight ones. It gives the whole comic more drama I think.

[systemcat]

  Thank you so much for your kind words guys. I'm about to make a thread now for this since the first page is now finished.

[systemcat]

I stated this on DeviantART and I'm going to basically state the same thing here with a little more explanation.

Started a Star Trek story and no one posted feedback on it so hence its on hiatus.

This is only going to be continued if people ask for me to do so.

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[StoryDreamer]

Wow, you colored that quickly!

I'm having trouble reading the dialogue, even when I click on it in Photobucket.

[systemcat]

Nuts, I wish I could resize how this is viewed. Tell yuh what, here's the link to where it's posted on DA so you can blow it up for better viewing or download it.

http://systemcat.deviantart.com/art/Past-The-Telescope-Page-1-438484551

[Griffin]

Looks great in colours, too! I hope it's not too wrong for me to say I find those Gorgs rather cute in their variety of colours. The pink one in particular

[systemcat]

Looks great in colours, too! I hope it's not too wrong for me to say I find those Gorgs rather cute in their variety of colours. The pink one in particular

Thanks Griffin  ! The coloring normally takes longer than the line work in my art, so really thanks  .
Weird, but on DeviantART one person ranted at me for putting in my own Gorgs that weren't in the show. The pain fact why there weren't more Gorgs in the show, I'm sure is because the outfits were likely very expensive to make. So things with them always focused on the three established characters.

There is going to be a rescuing of the ponies in this of course beyond Galaxy. I haven't figured this out yet in full but when the other ponies are being rescued, I want to show these other Gorgs in life styles not like what we've seen before. After all Fraggle Rock was an international show meant to appeal to a bunch of different cultures.

Here is the line art to page two:

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Post Merge: March 08, 2014, 11:05:26 AM

No one replying because it was line art  ?

Finished page 2 & DA link for those that can't read it here  .

http://systemcat.deviantart.com/art/Past-The-Telescope-Page-2-439059968

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[Griffin]

No one replying because it was line art  ?

I wouldn't take it personally, there doesn't seem to be too much activity on the art forum as of late. I'm happy to see there are at least a couple of active artists to bring some life here.   

The sinister shadow in the last panel looks great. I wonder what the next page will bring us...

[systemcat]

Hmm, this section seems nice 'n lively to me. Although I guess compared to other sections of the Arena, I get why you'd perspective it that way.

Even with one thing going unseen, I think it's clear what's happening in this third page. Line art of course right now, it is going to take a while to color.

Oh, and the size of the grass will be explained later towards the size of the ponies.

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[ZennaBug]

I love all the action you have in the panels. 

[systemcat]

Thanks ZennaBug!

Guys ..well to the only two people posting their thoughts. ..Is this comic I'm drawing awful? Only you Mod.s are commenting, and it's your default job to look at every one's work here to make sure no one is making bad posts. 

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[Firehooves]

I love the fact you're crossing over two great 80's shows like this, please, keep it coming! ^^