Well done on your first video! I know it’s quite the experience, sharing your content online. I’ve made a few animations, and it was terrifying at first. Your video looks well done for your first crack at editing. The quality isn’t that bad honestly. I’ve browsed YouTube and stumbled upon videos that might have been filmed on a microwave for all I know.
In summary, good job. But it’s also a learning opportunity. Can’t wait to see what you put out next!