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My first short comic, added last page!
« on: August 12, 2017, 01:17:19 AM »
Not my best work.  I drew this and painted it quickly, so it's not great, and my scanner scans water color horribly.  I just came up with what I thought was a neat idea/story, and hope you guys like it when I get there.  So I haven't tried to draw/paint nicely.  Just trying to crank this out before I loose interest and never finish.  More to follow.





























« Last Edit: August 20, 2017, 05:14:12 PM by Gator »


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Re: My first short comic (page one)
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2017, 03:18:25 AM »
Ooooh... mysterious comet!

This looks great! I love the poses of the ponies ^^

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Re: My first short comic (page one)
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2017, 06:46:06 AM »
Aww how cute!! I especially love DJs pose :D

 

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Re: My first short comic (page one)
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2017, 09:05:45 AM »
Great start! I love the soft colours (though I know how terrible scanners are with watercolours, the page must look even better IRL!) and the ponies' lively poses. Looking forward to the next page :)
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Re: My first short comic (page 1,2 and 3)
« Reply #4 on: August 13, 2017, 12:36:32 AM »
It's Kirby after he copied Samus.  RUN!!!
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Re: My first short comic (page 1,2 and 3)
« Reply #5 on: August 13, 2017, 01:46:51 AM »
Oooh, baby Glory on page 2 is so cute!! :heart:

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Re: My first short comic, updated with the BIG reveal!!!
« Reply #6 on: August 13, 2017, 10:52:06 PM »
Well, this just got interesting.
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Re: My first short comic, updated with the BIG reveal!!!
« Reply #7 on: August 14, 2017, 12:25:26 AM »
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Re: My first short comic, updated with the BIG reveal!!!
« Reply #8 on: August 14, 2017, 02:37:44 PM »
Wow. Can't wait to see what happens next, as mlp and Steven Universe are two of my favorite fandoms!
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Re: My first short comic, updated with the BIG reveal!!!
« Reply #9 on: August 14, 2017, 02:43:39 PM »
I love your art!  All of the ponies' faces are so expressive!



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Re: My first short comic, updated 8/16/2017
« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2017, 10:49:01 AM »
Oh my goodness,  a Steven Universe crossover?! Did not see that coming, hehe, how fun!
I love the way you draw the ponies' expressions ^^

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Re: My first short comic, updated 8/16/2017
« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2017, 12:14:23 PM »
Oh man, cute!! Go ponies go! I love SU and MLP, so I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Re: My first short comic, updated 8/16/2017
« Reply #12 on: August 17, 2017, 10:52:35 PM »
Snapdragon, I guess I have always thought of Dream Valley being in a magical land of its own and not of Earth.  I don't know if that means magical like Narnia through the wardrobe, an alternate dimension/reality, or another planet.  In my fanfiction that I've written, there is a magical portal in the mountains surrounding Dream Valley that connects to another portal in the mountains near Megan's home.  So like when Firefly and Megan go up into the clouds in "Midnight Castle" and come down in Pony Land, in my imagination they seamlessly passed the border between two worlds while shrouded in the mist of cloud. 
For my crossover, I even thought I could have the ponies tell Garnet, "Hey!  We can get you to Earth quick!  We got this portal thing and we go there all the time!"  However, I decided not to bog down the story with that as I have to finish this soon or I'll lose interest and never finish.  I decided the ponies will just have their own way unsaid for Megan visits, and just let them leave to join the Gems for this fight on the ship. 


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Re: My first short comic, added last page!
« Reply #13 on: August 20, 2017, 05:14:45 PM »
Just bumping so folks will see I've finished.


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Re: My first short comic, added last page!
« Reply #14 on: August 21, 2017, 05:36:06 AM »
i love your style, the ponies are all just too cute. your presentation and writing is great as well!