a NIGHTMARE in PONYVILLE

[pyrodarknessanny]

i got this progect running on Deviant Art,
i want more exposure for it but im not sure what groups to submit it to
as the story / fan fic has mature content (it gets quite grafic in some parts)
any ideas?

oh and the poster art i did for it!
if you havent guessed its a MLP  nightmare on elm st. cross over.

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[Taxel]

This looks really neat but the error on the poster makes me not want to read it honestly. 3: It should be "you're" instead of "your". Not trying to be rude or anything but a spelling/grammar error on a poster for a fanfic isn't encouraging, lol.

Otherwise it looks really neat! As for groups, I'd suggest FiM groups (of course) and possibly horror and writing groups as well.

[pyrodarknessanny]

yeah im aware  of that,
that particular font dosent have all the little  (" ' , ; : / )  things.

[ZennaBug]

Spooky!  I like the shading 

[Shimmer]

Spooky! Guess who's gonna have nightmares about Freddy? ( A hint: me! )
Great composition and shading. I like how all the ponies look a little distressed except for Pinkie Pie

[kittybethy]

I like the poster!

[Lina]

scary, but well done!

[Shaiyeh]

yeah im aware  of that,
that particular font dosent have all the little  (" ' , ; : / )  things.

you could always draw your own apostrophies!

Other than that, looks great well done!

(this might be too much poking around, but I'd have a look at the kerning, too. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kerning
it isn't something that's at all visible to an untrained eye, but I've caught interest for it, and well.. it's fun! x) )

[Dibbles]

yeah im aware  of that,
that particular font dosent have all the little  (" ' , ; : / )  things.

Regardless, I'm going to have to agree with both Taxel and miss_tuneful. Grammatical errors bother a lot of people, and I am one of them. You could draw your apostrophe and include the "E" at the end of the word.

[pyrodarknessanny]

ok i changed the wording a little bit,   
should be better now  (blarh the re-sizing kinda distorts it )

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